Roleplay good desc

An example of a good description Example 2: She is tall with a slender well-toned figure. The unusual color of her hair is definitely an odd yet distinguishing feature: its basic color is a deep auburn with strands of blonde, black, and other shades intermingled to create a striking effect. It's pulled back into a single braid that falls down her back. Her eyes are a light brown with flecks of gold that capture and reflect the light. Her smooth complexion is an even ivory cream tone that accents her facial features and adds to her strange attractiveness.

She is wearing a long hooded cloak of ebony, with intricate gold-colored embroidery, that falls down around her ankles. She wears trousers of a comfortable yet slightly worn wool-like material, tucked into the top of her sturdy leather boots. Hanging from her belt is a small brown pouch and strapped to her left thigh is a sheathed dagger with a silver hilt. Slung over her shoulder is a travel pack filled with various items.

1) I like that she divided it up into paragraphs with a line in-between them. It's almost impossible to read all in one lump. 2) What is great about this desc is that it assumes nothing and does what it is supposed to do, describe. She doesn't tell you how you feel, only describes. That is the #1 component of a good desc. 3) I can get a relatively good idea of what she looks like from this. I know her traits. I know the way she looks. If you can't visualize the character at all, the desc isn't worth keeping.